The Sad Truth..

by TinyDancer46

I don't know if this poem is any good... I'm just really upset right now and I have to get it out.

I thought things were good now
I thought we'd overcome the bad
Now I see through the illusion
Of the love I thought we had

You told me that you met her
Now you don't know what to do
I smiled and said "Just pick her
I'll be fine not having you"

But I couldn't hold my tears back
So I whispered "Got to go..."
Then I quickly hung the phone up
So my hurting wouldn't show

Now I'm shaking and I'm crying
And I don't know what to do
Cause the truth is, I was lying
I can't make it without you


Submission date : 2006-01-08
Last edit : 2007-06-24

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Latest comments

Fyri at 2008-04-08

Wow!! that is telling the truth. potery is away to tell people how you feel. i may be new but i write alot of poems. just let everything out. alot of people know how you fell.

Genna ( F C ) at 2008-04-24

WOW! Took my breath away! Amazing piece!

kayla at 2008-07-30

U are such a good poem writter. U r such a strong girl to come out and tell ur feelings like that u r doing well. Love hurts i know but u were not meant to be you will find some one else and maybe u might even find ur soul mate stay strong stick in there and good luck. love always kayla!!!

xOInLoveWithYouxO ( F P C ) at 2008-12-09

Awww this poem is sOo sweet. and well sad but its really good

IDK at 2010-08-28

Nawww u poor thing :(

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