But That Time

by Goran Rahim

We will live through the days
No matter if it is sun or rain.
We have hope for a happy tomorrow
Even if today we live through pain.
The days come and go
In every moment,
There is something new to see.
While you don't respect my feelings
The same feelings may not be.
There will also be a day,
When my memories take over your sleep.
Then that time,
I will not have pity.
You will look for me,
In every road and street.
But that time,
I will not be in this city.

**This is my favorite poem that I ever wrote**


Submission date : 2006-07-05
Last edit : 2007-04-11

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debbylyn ( F P C D ) at 2006-12-08

I read this one several times. Love the last lines. It certainly rings true for me....well done! 5/5

LoganL ( F P C D ) at 2006-12-19

I really like it but fell that there should be a little more.

mask*over*tears ( F D ) at 2007-01-02

One of the best poem!

Cassandra Wojick ( C ) at 2007-02-02

I truly enjoyed it!

Wallace ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-02

Excellent love poem, I've always thought that love poems were the best poems and you reminded me of that.

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