Magical kiss

by Cassanova

I look in her eyes,
and it tickles my soul,
the magical kisses,
are about to unfold..

staring into her eyes,
while holding her hips,
my body starting to tremble,
anticipating those lips..

i close my eyes,
and lean in for a kiss,
shaking so much,
i hope i don't miss..

then our lips met,
and it was the best,
my heart beated so fast,
i lost my breath..

looking in her eyes,
the feelings a bliss,
and every peck from her,
is a magical kiss....


Submission date : 2007-03-11

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cryNOmore at 2008-06-05

Wow I really enjoyed this poem it flows so smoothly.

grace ( F C ) at 2008-09-10

Ahhhhh sweet poem!! 5/5! =)

Ravi at 2008-09-10

Wonderful and superb expressions

DARK MEMORIES ( C ) at 2009-05-08

Awww this pome is so adorable how cute i love it it was well written

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